The only parts I would personally say could be improved would be points in the story where the player has to click on things and figure out what to do. It took me way too long to figure out I had to click the buttons in order to run the ship; I thought I had to get something from outside to fix it. Then there was the moment of finding the best place to shoot at the end, that took a while too.
Other than that, I loved the story. It had so much fun and character and it was super great. Well done on it and hope to maybe see a sequel if there ever is one, considering the ending >.>