wow, i had a lot of fun with this visual novel! the dialogue and banter was very campy and fun to go through, with the general story being more serious in tone. the shift between those two sides in the story made some of the pivotal parts of the narrative hit harder which is nice! i also like the interface-able device in the game, really adds a neat element of engagement while the going through the visual novel.
the presentation especially was really well done. i think you nailed the tone with how you utilized the audio and visuals. i also gotta compliment the art, really well done on the aesthetics in this game, the backgrounds look so nice!