I must admit that this isn't the art style I usually go for. I am more into semi-realism, so it may be one of the reasons why it looks... weird. There is also almost zero shading. But I will practice hard to deliver a better art the next time.
Honestly, you are the first person to tell me it is this evident. But I will give it to someone to read it before I publish it. I was thinking about doing so now, but I didn't find time to do so.
Now, after some days, I must agree about the dialogue and how the text appears. I won't do it next time.
But with the last point I disagree. The game is the one showing you something that isn't real. Noah never lied to you. Nor PC. The only character who lied is the game itself.
Thank you for your time and feedback, I appreciate it a lot!