Hello! Welcome to Feedback Quest 6! My name's Hythrain, and I'm one of the hosts and streamers for this event! This feedback is being written live on my stream.
First, why mushroom? I don't want mushroom. Mushroom bad.
Ok, got that out. This was a cute little game that was fun to play. Very simplistic visuals and music, works really nice for a short tale. However, I found a few things you may want to try and address. The snake has a second dialogue that just results in a blank box. If you don't talk to the snake and keep collecting dust, you refer to talking to the snake. Similarly, the first fae you come across will have you mention the snake even if you don't talk to it. Since you have different dialogue with the mouse depending on if you take the book, it should be possible to add other flags for those as well. Lastly, when you're in the fae forest with music, the music will cut out while talking with someone. Feels weird to me.
That's it from me! Love it! <3