for sure! A lot of the exposition worked well, and it's a useful device, but at points during the mirror scenes it felt forced. There might be some ways to show and not tell a little bit more about the character's identity. I think even shifting to the second person during that scene with the exact same dialogue would help, leaving it isn't a problem either! With the adversity thing, it just felt a little flat, it felt like it wanted to lean into the conflict and internal struggles a bit more but there wasn't any external homophobia/transphobia and the focus on internalization of it wasn't fleshed out to a point where it felt like it had a lot of stakes. This is really critical but overall the story was excellent and I loved it so much!!! It's amazing, truly.