Thank you for your review I think that it is fair. The theme threw me off and idea seemed incomplete. I had the first ending which was the lie and it didn't feel satisfying and too short so I added the second ending to try to make it longer but the second ending didn't transition well and was just an attempt at making it possible to finish with a better ending but I agree that I have a lot to improve on. This is good feedback for me and exactly what I was looking for.