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THIS WAS SO CUTE, I loved reading it!

It’s quiet for a minute. Trish has opened her journal again.
BLAINE (nudging Luke’s shoulder): You always know how to make things better, you know?
Trish lifts her head to look at Luke, raising her eyebrows. Luke pointedly turns around to lean his elbows on the railing.
LUKE: Um, I don’t know about that. But… thanks?
Behind their backs, Trish shakes her head and goes back to writing.

This was my favorite part! Matchmaker characters are always so fun.

BLAINE: You’re a good friend, you know that?
Luke looks down at his feet and mumbles incoherently.

LOL actually laughed at Luke’s awkwardness here

Blaine sits on the still-made bed, dressed in PJs. Luke emerges from the bathroom wearing his pajamas, toweling his hair. Blaine smiles at him.
BLAINE: Hey.
LUKE: Hey…
He lets the word hang, like a question.
BLAINE: Hmm?

I liked the pacing and anticipation of this scene a lot.

TRISH: So, who told who first?
BLAINE: Aw, come on, Trish, you’re embarrassing my boyfriend.

AWW

Amazing little script :D I’ll have to try out Ink sometime. Thanks for writing this!

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Ahhh thank you so much, this made my day--so glad you enjoyed it!!

I like Ink a lot so far; I found it a little trickier to pick up than Twine, but now that I've got the basics down I'm a fan!