Thanks for making such a warmhearted tale with cute characters and a sweet love story ~ I adore the art style, character designs, and especially all the adorable lil animals. I had fun playing. ^_^
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Oooh! Thank you so much for your comment and playthrough! 🧡 I also really appreciate the feedback that you sent with the rating, it's a fresh perspective that gave me a lot of insights! :O
Regarding the repetitive dialogue: you're correct in that. I understand it may look like so, I have a lot to learn to polish my writing more. >,<;; To fit within the time limit while at the same time making the work I enjoy, I could only choose between developing the characters vs. the plot (romance) itself. Both together were a bite too large for me to take at that moment, so I felt that focusing on the romance would be the most satisfying out of both. The story also spans for around half a day, 10(?) hours of time so it's a bit tricky to highlight the characters individually and like the romance at the same time. I agree that it could have been better if I had more writing experience and time.
I really want to learn and overcome these flaws, I hope the next projects will be better. ^~^
Once again, thank you very much for your time to create a playthrough and to write a full review, it's very kind of you! 🧡🍎