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A charming little tale. I enjoyed reading and getting to know these two and would love to see more! ^_^

This was a lot of fun, creepy in the best of ways ~ Loved the mystery and horror elements. Both were very well executed I thought and had me invested in the story. Keep up the good work, would love to see more! ^_^

A charming story with a light splash of drama ~ Warren is my favorite. I thought his character was so well written and complex. Love to see it. ♥ I enjoyed playing and am looking forward to seeing the full release! Keep up the good work ~ ^_^

No, sorry. It's only compatible with Windows and Mac. :(

Thanks for creating such a sweet fangame! Cepheus and Four were a lot of fun. I enjoyed getting to know them both and would love to see more in the future! ^_^

Thanks for creating a fun little adventure, I really enjoyed myself playing.^_^

Thanks for making such a fun experience! I really like all the character designs. Jordan was my favorite, he's such a sweetheart. Wonderful protagonist ~ ^_^

You're welcome, it was my pleasure! Ohh ~ Gotcha, that makes sense. Thanks for letting me know! ^_^

This made for quite a memorable experience and I sincerely enjoyed playing (even though I did quite poorly. lol). ^_^; I'll play again and try for a better ending next time. :3

You're welcome, it was my pleasure! And all perfectly understandable. It's certainly a daunting task to do so much in so little time! Yet you did very well and have much to be proud of. ^_^

Thanks for making such a warmhearted tale with cute characters and a sweet love story ~ I adore the art style, character designs, and especially all the adorable lil animals. I had fun playing. ^_^

Happy to help, glad you found it useful! And entertaining hehe ~ ^///^

It's all perfectly understandable. Considering the amount of work you did in such a short amount of time, it's quite an impressive accomplishment and something to be proud of. I'm so slow and terrible at planning, so jams certainly aren't for me, but I do enjoy seeing the sort of stories people come up with. It never ceases to amaze me. o///o This was an excellent start and I'm sure it'll only continue to get even better as you go. Keep up the good work, I'll look forward to playing the remastered version! :D

Me and my fiance played/reviewed the visual novel together and we especially enjoyed the story, the lore, and the art style. I kinda fangirled a bit during the Kael/Brannan swordfight scene. That was my favorite part. ;) Would love to see more chapters and/or a remastered version of this! ^_^

Lmao! Hopefully we'll finally be able to finish it in another three thousand years! ;D

Oops! No, that's just some code I use to test sprites. ^^; I got rid of it and the new version 1.3.1 should fix the issue. So you'll have to delete the old version and download the new one if you want to start a new game. Sorry about the inconvenience!

Thanks for letting me know and if you have any other issues, feel free to message again and I'll try and fix it. :)

Thanks for making such a fun and creative experience! Yuki is a sweetie and I really sympathized for the main character and their struggles. I enjoyed playing ~ ^_^

This is great! Loved it ~ I laughed and fangirled quite a lot. xD
This is just the first chapter (because it took me over five hours to read through it all), but I'll be uploading the rest throughout the week. ^_^

I played through Klaus' route and loved it so much! All the characters are so fun and I enjoyed the story. Looking forward to playing the other routes as well! I got Amos on the quiz, so maybe I'll try his next. ^_^

Aww, thanks~ ^_^ I will indeed consider it if I can think up a good story for them. :3

And done! Should be good now ~ ^_^
(I was already working on it before you commented, that's how I was able to get it done so fast) ;)

I'm working on this now and should be added in an update soon ~ ^_^

Sure, I don't mind. Thanks for asking :)

Hehe ~ You're welcome! ;D

(it's okay I totally get it ~)

Aww, this vn was positively adorable and endearing. Short and sweet, I found the story heartwarming and relatable! Even though it's about ghosts and monsters, the message is very "human" and something everyone needs to hear and remember every now and then. I loved the characters and their unique designs were so colorful and fun. The cake mini game was fun and really made me want to eat some cake, because they looked so tasty! I really can't think of anything to critique. I sincerely enjoyed playing from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story ~ ^_^

Such a suspenseful murder mystery! The story, characters, setting all had me hooked right the start and never disappointed. I'll be looking forward to seeing how it ends. I don't really have a favorite character this time, I found myself liking them all about the same. Which of course means I'm curious enough to want to see all of the endings. Hehe ~

My only criticism is that I found the main font to be a strange choice in that it looks like all the letters are capitalized. I found it a bit hard on the eyes and distracting to read. But fortunately the context of the writing made up for it and made me overlook the issue. Still, it might be nice if there was an alternative option to the stylized font? Something a little more basic and easy to read.

Other than that, thank you for making such a wonderful story. I enjoyed it wholeheartedly and am looking forward to seeing how it ends! ^o^

I think the story, ideas, and characters are really interesting! I can tell there's some depth to be found in the lore, character backstories, and the action sequences were well done. The story itself has a lot of promise.

Now aside from some of the more obvious grammar issues and a lack of audio ...

My main criticism in terms of writing is I feel this reads more like a novel than a visual novel. When writing a vn script, I find it's best to think of it more like a play script than a book full of pages and pages of narrative text. Generally speaking, it's best to keep the dialogue exchanges and character interactions longer and the narrative explanations shorter, especially when you don't have any visuals to pair along with the narration.  If all the reader has to look at is a black screen or static background and paragraph after paragraph of text, it can get a little tedious, breaking the reader's immersion into the story.

As for the visuals, I think the sprites and CGs by themselves are cute, expressive, and nicely drawn. However, the sprites clash with the backgrounds. The differences in art style is too apparent and don't mesh well together. I think the special visual effects were a nice touch, though some of the flashing ones were a little disorienting. Personally, I was fine, but someone who's sensitive to flashing lights/patterns might have trouble with it. I'd advise maybe consider putting a warning about somewhere? Just a friendly suggestion.

Overall, I think this is a good effort and, criticisms aside, I still enjoyed it. I wish you the best on continuing this and future projects! :)

Hmm ... Maybe. If I can think of something. :3
I don't really know too much about her backstory tbh ... ^^;

Such a fun and (creepy) cute game! I loved the story, characters, and the gameplay was simple, yet engaging. The plot was well paced and structured. It kept me in suspense all throughout. The characters were all so endearing and sweet. I love the art style, the background, the music, and sound effects ... they all compliment each other well and had some nice attention paid to the details. Everyone did a wonderful job! The first playthrough I got "Ending 6", which made me curious, so I went back and discovered a couple of the others. I like that the choices matter in that regard.

If I had to think of anything in the way of critique, it'd be to suggest adding in some sort of achievement system or something to let the player know which endings they've already seen. Since I know now there's at least six of them. However, especially considering this was made for a jam with a time limit, I think it's perfectly acceptable as is. And I certainly enjoyed playing it. ^_^

I really like the cute art style and graphics! But I just feel the need to mention that the story ... is definitely not as cute and wholesome as the art style. For one thing, the writing could benefit from some editing as there were many grammatical issues, missing punctuation, and poor sentence structure. However, more importantly, the main character smokes and drinks in attempt to fit in (there's no option to avoid it) and ends up fawning for a guy she barely even knows, which just really isn't a message I can agree with and makes her somewhat unlikable as a character for having no self respect imo. She's also hit on by a creep at the bar, which I wish sexual harassment was mentioned in the "warnings" section, as that's kind of a trigger for me personally (I seriously just wish I had been able to punch him at least xD). I really can't stand jerks like that.
Anyway, I hope this doesn't sound too harsh or anything, I just felt the need to comment. Especially since I feel that the look of this one is very misleading imo.

This was a really interesting idea! I like the lore and character designs especially. I thought the clues were well incorporated and cleverly used to allow the reader to solve the mysteries alongside the characters. The music, backgrounds, and sound effects got the job done, helping to set the creepy, suspenseful mood. And I like all the different angles that were visually incorporated during the scenes, really helped with the immersion that we were witnessing the story unfold. The overall plot was wonderfully paced, well structured, and kept me in suspense all throughout. My only criticism is I thought the ending paled in comparison to the rest of the story. Once the murderer started doing their villainous monologue, revealing all their secrets ... the writing felt forced and rushed to me. While the other characters' reactions to the situation left me feeling unsatisfied with how things turned out. Aside from that though, I thought it was very well done! Murder mysteries are a challenge to write, so I respect all the thought and effort that was put into this one.

I will do my best! ^_^

Do not underestimate the imagination of a fangirl. xD

Thanks! Lol. I think she does, too. xD

Got it, awesome ~ Thanks so much for the wonderful feedback I appreciate it! ^_^ Idk when, but next time I update this I'll be sure to add your name the credit under beta tester.

No worries. Google doc will work, thanks! ^_^

Oh sure, thanks I appreciate it! ^_^
You can just post it here if you like. I'm not too picky. :3

Aww, thanks! I appreciate it ~ ^///^

Mmm ... it's kinda alive? ^^; It's been on a bit of hiatus as I've been working on other projects (I'm a solo/hobbyist developer), but I do plan on updating it eventually. I recently redid Nixie and Wisteria's sprites, so right now I'm (slowly) working on replacing the old ones and plan on releasing a minor update once all the old sprites have been replaced (including Griffin and Ignus as well). Can't give an exact date, but maybe in a month or so?

As for adding more to the story ... I plan on finishing Nixie and Wisteria's chapter 2 next. Which I'll have a better idea of when that'll happen once I'm done with the minor update and will make a post in the dev's log. Thanks for inquiring ~ ^_^

No romance, just friendship. :)

Aww, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it ~ ^///^
Unfortunately I'm just a solo developer who makes VNs like this one for a hobby. So my production rate is a little unpredictable as creating a visual novel by yourself takes a lot of time and effort.
However I am getting close to finishing the second chapter of Ignis and Griffin's route and expect to finish it sometime next month (hopefully~)
I do have a twitter ( https://twitter.com/GalesGoddess ) but it's my own personal account and I honestly don't upload on there all that often. Most of my artwork and writing I upload onto DeviantArt ( https://www.deviantart.com/goddess-of-gales ) and I post updates about my visual novels on there from time to time as well.
I don't have my own discord server, but that's not a bad idea and something I might consider in the future. :)