I enjoyed playing this! The narrator / main character has a nicely light-hearted tone, which meshes really well with the whimsical (and really good-looking) art.
I also got a sense that the main character has no idea what they're doing, both through the dialogue and the way options like the ones in the cave are essentially made at random. So it gave an Alice in Wonderland sort of vibe where I don't know what I'm doing, but I'm moving forward somehow. Which was weirdly nice.
There were a few places where it felt like the text appeared in the wrong order, or more likely, was an older version. E.g. the snail calls you Thimbleton, which, if I were to hazard a guess, was the canon name of the main character before you put in the ability to type in a name? And I think when the spider first appears, the narrator says "this guy indeed has impressive long legs", which implies that we've previously talked about his legs, but we haven't.
Basically, probably errors that crept in through iterations, etc. I.e. not a big issue.
I managed to get to the end. I just hope Lil Buddy doesn't end up being the big bad. (Also, I really loved the rat king's dialogue (and art!); I thought that was really well done with the different ones shouting out things.)