What is the protagonist's default name?
I imagine it is Armando if he is male and Joanne if she is female.
Certainly creative names. Edit: But honestly, I think its better if the protagonist is nameless. It allows players to immerse themselves in the situation.
Isn't it implied that Scriviner is male? (leo being not interested in girls, but interested in you + some phrasing here and there)
upd: oh yeaaaah, crusty shirt incident too. Almost slipped my mind.