Thank you so much for sharing this with the world.
I loved it, amazing effort for just 1 week. was so peaceful and relaxing.
if you ever do get the time to work on it a little bit more, right at the end I made the mistake of stepping on the platform while listening to the last book and both voice lines started to play at once so having some form of check that there is not currently a voice being played before playing the next one would be nice. might have just been my laptop as it was being a little slow about even launching it and it was running super hot but I did fined that the draw distance could have been bigger because from the top I could not see down to the forest or beach.
all in all though it was an amazing experience and super well put together especially considering the time frame
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Thanks so much for reviewing it! Thanks for pointing out the voice overlaps, I'd identified it, but I temporarily ignored it to try and comply with the challenge of starting, working, and finishing in a short time. I think it's important for me to get comfortable with putting things out into the world even when they aren't as ready as I want them to be, just for the act of doing ten things amateurishly rather than one thing perfectly. I learnt SO MUCH from doing this one project to the most basic level, I'm excited for what I'll learn each time.
The draw distance was limited actually for purely aesthetic reasons down on the beach, so that you can't see the woods until you walk nearer to them, but I could contextually modify the fog distance so that visibility increases, which is a good idea!