Thanks so much for reviewing it! Thanks for pointing out the voice overlaps, I'd identified it, but I temporarily ignored it to try and comply with the challenge of starting, working, and finishing in a short time. I think it's important for me to get comfortable with putting things out into the world even when they aren't as ready as I want them to be, just for the act of doing ten things amateurishly rather than one thing perfectly. I learnt SO MUCH from doing this one project to the most basic level, I'm excited for what I'll learn each time.
The draw distance was limited actually for purely aesthetic reasons down on the beach, so that you can't see the woods until you walk nearer to them, but I could contextually modify the fog distance so that visibility increases, which is a good idea!