Although the general idea is good, and considering that it is incomplete, there is a lot of text at the beginning that takes away your desire to play.
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Thanks. I am definitely going to need to find a way to speed through the text without waiting for it to finish scrolling so it is less frustrating to wait through since this game is meant to be an adventure platformer with a focus on story and interacting with characters as well as the puzzle and exploration aspects.