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no issues, I figured it would be a solo project. A lot of these tend to be. I wish I was as knowledgeable as my friend or some of the other creative folks I've talked to on here to give examples and advice on the animation side of things... honestly, some of them make it look easy, but as someone who has dabbled in game design... I bloody well know better. It's why I said it could help balance the descriptive text when used, because you could set it up as described. And from what I've seen, you can be fairly descriptive lol. I said this to a buddy I showed this to, in how it reminded me of old RP I did years ago. The best way to improve is to keep doing it and get creative with your thinking, but also making sure to keep it coherent and non contradictory to what is being described. I would have to redo the entire thing to find the specific line that I had to re-read, so I can't tell you which one it was off the top of my head. Sorry. But it's what really reminded me of how I used to write things lol.

As for any of the rest, it's good to see it's already planned for fixing here n there and I would definitely not expect any of what I said right now this instant. I know these things take a lot of time, it's why I made sure to stress that this has a good base and just needs some building and polish :D you don't make a bridge or skyscraper in a day, after all. Again, I will look forward to possibly getting back to this after it's gotten more updates to see how well it's coming along. Good luck and I hope you keep having fun with it!