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Really sharp metaphors, probably one of my favorite aspects of this piece. Also loved seeing some Change Demons! The idea of the "True Death" waiting in the fog was ominous. I suspect the word limit was a challenge--there feels like so much more waiting to be told in this tale. Great job!

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I'm glad you liked it - I really struggled with pacing this one since I wound up with a story I was very happy with at about 1800 words. I think I pared it down while keeping most of the important beats intact but since I wrote it, it's hard for me to step back and look at it with fresh eyes.