Aaww my heart goes to Sher and Shariar <333 I'm wishing for their happiness! I hope they will be able to share more stories with each other in the future. Please let them know it's good to be themselves and don't mind too much of people's expectation, they're the one living their life! Even when it's an arranged marriage, both of them seem so sweet, I hope they'll be more comfortable with each other, being themselves!!
Oh, and I hope Duna will be able to chase her dreams too!!
It's a well done story tackling some societal issues indeed. You did well in bringing it up! I sincerely hope they can go through it and life a happy life.
I love the vibe and the motifs of Talisman of Dawn, you're doing so well with the art: it pops so well and it gives the feeling of a fairy tale; "Once Upon A Time" indeed! I'm enjoying the writing and BGM as well. It's well done and I'm looking forward to more!