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LMAO they do look alike!!

LIN LOOKS GREAT!! i like the minimalistic "character sheet"(?)

i think the route selection approach is great too! and having the entire common route as a demo seems like the common practice overall in demos i played... either that or just half of it, but it has to be in a cliffhanger kind of scene, i think, otherwise it just feels anti-climatic...

you're welcome 🫂🫂🫂 take all the time you need!!

oii, voce precisa escolher namorar ele > perguntar onde ele cresceu > escolher o purificador de ar > não soltar ele (pelo menos foi assim que eu peguei)

i don't even know what to say tbh.............. i'm gonna start by my visceral reaction when i read this:

YOUR ARTSTYLE AND YOUR CHARACTERS ARE NOT A PROBLEM !!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is probably very hard to believe and i think a lot of us indies tend to put the blame in ourselves or in the passion we pour into things but it's simply not true. your creative vision is not a problem. it is literally your strength. you're not doing anything wrong. 

i personally believe that you've made a name for yourself in the indie scene, even if it may not feel like it. your artstyle is easily recognizable, which is something many artists strive for. your stories are strong, well-crafted, and you said it yourself -- they brought a small community of passionate fans who LOVE your stuff. and i DOUBT people are annoyed at you for drawing genzou, because they LOVE your stuff. they love YOU, as a creator. and if something makes you happy, it will make them too.

i'm sorry for your multiple rejections (even if steam didn't directly "reject" you, it buried your game so it kinda feels like the same). and i'm gonna tell your feelings of hopelessness are very valid. i really hope you're taking good care of yourself even if this year hasn't been the kindest to you (i feel that too, personally). i just want to say that it's not the end, ok? it only ends when it's over. and you're still alive and you don't know what the future might bring -- and we often tend to think it's gonna be worse, but maybe it can be good too? very good? you don't know. i think life works in mysterious ways and success sometimes isn't a big break. sometimes succes comes very slowly, in baby steps. and you have to be a little patient with it, patient with yourself. and that sucks lolllllllllllllllllll but i guess it's the only way.

i hope you can find some rest in everything. you did very well and i'm proud of you for putting yourself out there, for trying, even if it didn't work out this time. but really it sounds like a lot so yeah. yeah keep that rest going king. and i hope learning german isn't beating your ass too much.

sending lots of love to you !!!!!!!!!!!!!! take care !!!!!!!!!!

hello! when i saw this game, it captivated me instantly. i love your artstyle! it's so elegant and soft, it evokes a strong but gentle image that makes my heart flutter. the backgrounds were also beautiful and dreamy, and i felt embraced by the story.

i loved all the interactions between enoch and cael. they have such a sweet dynamic that made me feel heartwarmed. their personalities are really kind too, in different ways that compliment each other.

the music and the writing were also great! honestly, the whole combo of the game (art+writing+music) was so amazing. it felt like playing a professional studio vn! i was so impressed when i found out it was your first visual novel. i must say that the ending left me speechless! i was not expecting that. all in all, it is really a work of art and will definitely stay in my memories.

i can really see how much effort you put in crafting and polishing everything. the gui is also so beautiful!! i hope you're resting well, too. and i'm definitely staying to see the rest of your anthology. thank you for this game!!

yeahhhhhhhhh gotta love those italians

excited to play it again!!

this was so cuteeeeeeee

hello! this game was pretty nice :) i got 4 endings, is there a guide to get the 5th one?

okay i HAD to comment on this because there is only ONE comment and this game is SO good????????

to be real w you i accidentally pressed space at the beginning and the dialogue simply EXPLODED and i was like WHAT then i came back and found out the bug T_T (it was so funny though)

ANYWAY the aesthetic of the game really captivated me. i love the palette and i love the character designs (all of them are really distinct both in design and in narrative voice!). the whole game was SO funny too. i couldnt stop laughing at dearest general and all the characters were charming. i was pretty invested in illisible's whole story the whole time, i couldn't stop asking "why is she still here? the case seems obvious. what is holding her here? why is she acting so aloof? why did she kill the child?" and as the dialogue continued the realization that it was a scheme much greater than her and the incident dawned on me in a very tragic way. 

as she spoke more directly (or rather indirectly...) about the choice of people for her trials, her past and her compulsory recruitment, the truth started to unveil in such a way that made me really surprised. the quality of the writing was impeccable! we find out not only about WHO she is or WHY she did it, but also WHY the characters won't frame her as guilty -- and not because she is not guilty, but because they don't want her to be. and not out of an empathetic, sensible urge -- but because the military needs her. not her as a person, but her as a pawn. 

hearing about her's and the other person's recruitment (sorry i forgot their name) made me legit perplexed. thats some CRAZY world they're living in. made me very curious about the whole setting too!! i would love to see more games in their world!

anyway thats what i wanted to say. you did a very good job with this!! thank you for this game. bye.

🥺🥺🥺🫂🫂🫂 thank you

this was nice :) there is a bug that doesnt let me leave any shop i enter, so every time i go shopping i have to shop inside the same one :( otherwise it was nice!!

so good!!

all the styles are so cuteeeee 

this was so cuteeeeeee 

thank you!! 

fun :D

i love her omg 

so cuteeeeeeeee

cuties 

this was so funnn!!!

i agree a lot with this!! i love playing dating sims and romance games mostly because i want to learn about the characters and because it's fun to be so close to them. but i love even more when there are platonic options where i can feel 100% comfortable in the story and it's a shame that friendship is treated in such a shallow way most of the time. i'm trying my best to write about platonic love in a meaningful way (because, after all, it means a lot to me) and i hope other people can learn to appreciate it more too. thank you for your manifesto

SO TRUE

thank you! 

yayyyy

thank you for the comment!! :)) 

sorry for the late response, itchio hid the post from me!!!!

and that's okay!!!

BRIGADO!! (desculpa a demora na resposta, o itchio marcou esse comentario como spam T_T)

SORRY FOR THE WAIT itchio spam filter hid this comment from me T_T

yeah i get it!! i have plans to translate it but its pretty hard considering the limited amount of time/energy i have,,, but thanks for your interest!!

thank you 🫂

hehe thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

oh i would love to see a glossary!! i've implemented it in one of my games before and i think its very useful to keep away from infodumping (it also lets you explain things better because you dont need to worry about the timing of the scenes)

aaa thank you!!! 💞 

cheering on you!!!!!!

thank you for playing ❤️ 

oh hello!! I would love to! 

you can contact me at lyailasouza@gmail. com !!

the bg looks beautiful !! 

i really like sports as any american person would do so when i saw that there was a trending new sports show i was like dang!!! i need to watch !!! but i was really confused because there were girls there and i didnt know there were sports for girls. and the girls were holding hands and not saying 'no homo' afterwards. i was so confused. are they sisters? my mommy said that girls can have best friends but they hate each other so i dont think they are friends? i dont treat my friends that way. i dont get it. they are rivals but they spend time with each other? like? thats literally so unprofessional. i went ahead and bought the book and i hope it answers something.

p.s.: the s*x scenes are so unnecesary. like why are they doing that? and before marriage? like i dont understand. but i really love queenberleigh. shes a girls girl for calling them out.  i would legit marry her in a non homosexual way. if it was legal. because its not legal right. right?