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Hi Jessica, 

you have developed a great initial Grey box.

Your choice of core colors works really well together, and you have selected a font which is easily read creating an accessible application for your users. (it is slightly difficult to read the "team charlie" but I think this is just an upload error your screenshots show it differently).  Whilst your choice of click colors assist greatly with identifying the navigation i am concerned that to many colors are used in the buttons detracting from your overall consistency. 

In regard to menu panel. it feels a bit funny positioned in the left corner. maybe this menu could have run the whole left side for aesthetics. 

All this said you have made an exceptional start great work. 

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Cool, thanks James! So about the title, I used the same screenshots as shown in the game here, so I don't think it's an upload error. But yeah, I agree with the rest of the points mentioned.