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My feedback for the e-book:

Easy to use?: 5

Information understandable?: 5

Engaging?: 5

Sounds appropriate?: 5

Content appropriate?: 5

Show this e-book to someone you know?: 5

Re-use this e-book?: 4

Extra feedback: This is a very educational e-book appropriate for its target demographic with good quality animations/graphics and content.

Cool, thanks James! So about the title, I used the same screenshots as shown in the game here, so I don't think it's an upload error. But yeah, I agree with the rest of the points mentioned.

Great, Thanks!

This looks great! I like the assets used, especially the crab and wave background. The menu buttons all look consistent with their use of colours and fonts, which are user-friendly. How the buttons change to different colours when clicked is a nice feature! If I had to give any feedback, I think adding a different font to the Titles could be nice for adding an extra 'beach' element and adding an exit/quit button to the menu.

Hey, this grey box looks great! I like the design of the assets used and the design of the octopus character with the lighting. I also like the design of the character menu with its user-friendly design using recognisable symbols. As for feedback, I think moving the camera slightly back could be good to take in a bit more of the scene and making the character display a bit larger.  

Thank you!

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It does look great! I like the menu layout with the buttons and colour scheme. And Especially the asset textures. I couldn't figure out how to properly set up the beach ball lol. If I had to come up with some feedback, you could add some objects to the sky like clouds and sun and possibly have the lighting show that.