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Hi Jessica, 

you have developed a great initial Grey box.

Your choice of core colors works really well together, and you have selected a font which is easily read creating an accessible application for your users. (it is slightly difficult to read the "team charlie" but I think this is just an upload error your screenshots show it differently).  Whilst your choice of click colors assist greatly with identifying the navigation i am concerned that to many colors are used in the buttons detracting from your overall consistency. 

In regard to menu panel. it feels a bit funny positioned in the left corner. maybe this menu could have run the whole left side for aesthetics. 

All this said you have made an exceptional start great work. 

Hi Mitch, you have developed a great initial development for your Greybox. 

Your choice to make a consistent design across all scenes makes it really easy for the user to access. and minimize any confusion or navigation issues. 

the choice of the colors appears to work together. and ties the beach them together Nicely, i would however look at changing the onclick of the button color or the text to make it clear to the user this is only minor and does not detract from the overall finish. 

To develop the user experience, I would look at adding a few more features/assets to the scene as the water can be a little plane to look at and disengaging.

overall nice work keep it up. 

Hi Albus

Whilst using your eBook. I have made a few notes for you. 

Navigation:

Your Navigation throughout your website is easy to identify and navigate. However, I found that the placement of your controls moved around from page to page. I would consider making these all uniform and in the same position to make the experience as easy as possible for the user. I also believe that the size of your buttons was different from page to page. 

Color:

the color pallet throughout your pages is different.  I would consider having one highlight color when you mouse moves over a button. This will allow for the user to easily navigate your site.  been able to do this will assist in reducing the cognitive load required to navigate your book. this is important to increase the user experience. the user doesn't want to have to work for the content they want it handed to them on a silver platter. 

keep it these few adjustments will go a long way in creating a better UX.