I played this game today in one sitting, and I had a fun time with it. It was just long enough that Clara kept her charm as a good protagonist throughout, and the rest of the cast and the story were enough to carry interest. If it would've been longer I feel like the VN would've needed a bit more, but you knew where to cut it to keep it good.
The yuri, the vibes and the music were very nice and chill and what I was looking for in this game, so good job on that. As for the worldbuilding itself, sometimes the campy 'evilness' of the regime and Father felt at odds with some of the more serious moments, but I guess it's not easy to toe that line when you're writing a game like this. It didn't take me out of the story at any point though, just a small nitpick.
Anyway, this was pretty fun!