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So I really doubt this game is going to see much more progress given the fact that its been a whole yeah at this point. My main issue with the story is that its definitely trying to get you to like these agents, but at no point is it justified. As far you, the player, are aware they work for the same people that murdered your family. And they each apparently have 'Flairs' like you, making them even more detestable since they are essentially hunting down people like them to protect their own skin.


Just so I don't seem overly negative I do like this game. It's an interesting premise and world that I would have loved to see it expanded upon. 

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Hi, the rewrite of chapter is coming as soon as possible, so while it might not be true progress it's still being worked on. 
I understand why you take issue with that aspect of the game, though it's difficult to work around considering the significance of the agents as the main characters in the game. (excluding MC of course.)

I am working on rewriting chapter 2 at the moment, and will take your feedback into account as I do so.

If you play again once the rewrite of chapter 2 is out (which will hopefully not take as long), feel free to give me further feedback, it is always appreciated.

Thank you for playing and taking the time out of your day to comment and I really do appreciate constructive criticism. :)