Interesting entry I really enjoyed. It was paced well and well presented. I really liked the waking/blinking animation that played after fall into the hole, subtle but effective for immersion. Also the rain effects and voice acting was also very good. Really liked.
Some of the points that bugged me a little are the invisible wall that stopped me from entering the building on my left after entering an area. It really stood out as something to enter and the wall stopped me. The lighter when it is first turned on was very bright although I was in a dark room with a largish monitor and the jump scare sound effect was a little friendly, my son heard it said it should be scarier.
Enjoyed the playthrough.