Considering this was submitted 3 days before the deadline, I do have to take that into consideration..
I did enjoy the story, I do wish there was a bit more to it that could have been added.
There was only a bit of reading, and no real gameplay other than moving around. The menu was also a default menu and you didn't change any of the classes or information like that to suit the game properly.
Now the art? the creep factor was amazing. I loved the colors and faces and looks of the rooms used. it was really good.
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I have very limited knowledge when it comes to this kind of thing. I almost use the program like a rough draft due to having no programming knowledge, which is something I intend to acquire over time. I definitely didn't take the menu into consideration at all. It was more so just supposed to be an interactive story. would like to have more choices... like not taking the key. or avoiding butch at the pool table.