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Hey thanks for the advice, I'd like to ask about the bluntness though if you don't mind. I've been trying to get better at writing.

Could you tell me a bit more about what feels especially blunt to you? Is it the "message" that's too in your face? Is the end cutscene dialogue not subtle enough? Or something else?

Thank you, I would really appreciate it.