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The writing is pretty blunt - and gameplay isn't the most engaging it could be, but I think the concept of 'The Reconnection Clinic' has potential. 

If the developer decided to flesh it out a bit more with added gameplay depth and and increase the game's emphasis on nuanced player actions. It might be pretty compelling. 

Hey thanks for the advice, I'd like to ask about the bluntness though if you don't mind. I've been trying to get better at writing.

Could you tell me a bit more about what feels especially blunt to you? Is it the "message" that's too in your face? Is the end cutscene dialogue not subtle enough? Or something else?

Thank you, I would really appreciate it.