Aaa this was a frustrating read haha...
It was very well-written, and I think you did a great job with the characters! Mari really is a very infuriating MC though, what with how incredibly stubborn she is. I did feel sorry for her, though, which is pretty impressive. You did a great job writing a character who's irritating, but also sympathetic. She felt very believable, too. She's giving big depressed vibes haha, she might be a bit too relatable...
Goldie is also such a sweetheart! I liked her a lot, she's such a fun character. I love her fashion sense (or should I say Mari's fashion sense?) too!
This was a really nice read, so thank you for creating it! I enjoyed my time with it a lot!