Okay, this got me creeped out which is fantastic. You're super good at making scary faces and inserting them in places where people won't notice them right away in some scenes. I'm slow so I didn't really get the story but man it did make me FEEL. The slow fade between each face shot was a nice pacing tool IMO too. Increase the anticipation of what you'll see.
Viewing post in Carol's Hotel and Bar jam comments
*Spoiler alert*
The main character visits her home town every year for a long time.... Implying Maybe they are a vampire or some other type of monster- that's up to the individual playing to decide. You're supposed to believe they are an private detective at first. She puts a spell on ppl she believes to be monsters... And absorbs what last bit of humanity they have to feed something inside of her that has existed for a long time... It's open ended so the person playing can come up with their own theories of what is going on to avoid spoon feeding the player too much.
Thank you! I really enjoyed making the game and loved creating the eerie feel and making the creepy faces. And having someone say it spooked them to any extent is a good feeling and all I wanted lol.