Okay first, I want to mention the writing level on this game is off the charts, I played A LOT of Visual Novels and this is definitely top 3. I even feel bad that my illiterate brain could no make it justice while reading, my voice was giving out at the end, I apologize for that.
The story is really fascinating and not only it holds a deep meaning it also draws inspiration from proper fairy tales and I can always appreciate that; The character design goes really well with the narration and writing style. It really feels like reading a classic dark fairy-tale book but enhanced by Illustrations and interactivity.
The music and the User interface are also worth mentioning they fit the game so well and both are gorgeous and unique.
The riddles and puzzles are so fun, they add a lot to the game and are so well implemented that they never take you out of the story.
The replayability is so high since there is a multitude of choices, endings and creatures to encounter and talk to; As far as I can see a lot of choices affect what happens, I can hardly believe this is a gamejam game, outstanding job in every aspect of the game.
Keep up the good work!