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I have started playing this and have gotten a bit into the forest, will be finishing this but not today though! I have some early notes for you: 

- Music, sfx and visual art are pretty much perfect, its so good I feel jealous. 

- Story seems to be well thought out and interesting. 

- The theme and mood is great. 

- The dog is a good dog. 

- Combat feels really good. 

Now for some constructive feedback: 

- You really need to have someone look over the English translation, while it gets the points across the text feels clunky and unnatural, even more so the dialogue. 

- The standard rpgmaker emotion balloons do not fit with the rest of the exemplary good artstyle. 

- The loading of text into the textboxes needs to be looked over, at least in the english version. Sometimes a single letter will be left over for the next box and often the text is being cut in a weird way. 


Bugs: 

- Door in first scene is misaligned. 

- Graphical glitching on the sofa in first scene. 

- Friend in first scene disappears if you talk to him from below. 

- I entered the kitchen before I was supposed to and the game crashed. Tried it one more time and it worked. 

- You can get stuck in the "invisible wall" in the forest and lock your game. 

- Talkbubble was still active in parasiteboss. 

- Talkbubbles appear next to characters in first scene even when you cant talk to them. 

Looking forward to continuing my playthrough tomorrow! 

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Oh dang, and I thought it was bug-free. You're helping me a lot, thank you. For the English translation, I'm aware of that but I think I'll need help from a native English speaker if I want the translation to be perfect. Looking forward to hearing more of your feedback. 🙏🏻