Hello Mr. (or Ms.) Atemsiel. I have just finished playing your game and i gotta say i really enjoyed it. This kind of game where the story can change drastically based on your choices is one of my favorite types of games. Specially if there are delayed consequences to your choices, so you can't just try out all of the alternatives and see everything. It really makes you think what the possible consequences of making a choice could be. It's really fun when you come back around for the second time and a completely different interaction happens if you just choose to say something different. But it must be a pain in the ass to write. That said i have some constructive criticism to make.
The first one is my only problem with the writing so far. I think that Hikari warms up to you a little too fast. Even if you choose the most lovey dovey options for her available i still don't think it makes sense for her personality type. On top of that i specially don't think it makes sense for her to initiate that kiss at the end of her date. For a girl that is so shy and has never had a boyfriend before i don't think it makes sense for her to be this brave and this forward. It kinda took me out of it a little bit.
The second problem is the performance. The perfomance was really poor in most of the scenes with animations. I don't know if this is something you can fix but it looks like the game primarily uses the CPU to handle the 3d graphics, which might be the cause of the bad performance.
And my last problem is with a softlock that can occur. If you end up getting to Sasha's punishment scene and you said to Riley that you don't want to go to the party, no matter how you choose to play out Sasha's punishment the game just breaks. Every time you finish the scene it goes back to the beginning to play out again and it just keeps repeating. The only way i found to get out of it was to go back to a previous save and just tell Riley you want to go to the party.
Thanks for listening to my ramblings! Really excited for the next update!