Hey KKpotato, would you be interested in letting me proof read your writing for the game? I just started playing the latest update and there are loads of pesky English mistakes and things that could've been worded better. Let me know if you want help.
This is really cool, specially the music part. Pale Carnations has this feature, a music room where you can not only play every track in the game whenever you want, but whenever a track plays you can go there and the name of the track gets highlighted. I wish every AVN had that.
i think some of the earlier chapters would do good with a remastering. both in terms of writing and visuals, they are really outdated. i think it would be good to consider that.
there's a minor spelling mistake in the scene after the weird humanoid thing is restrained. Venus says "lighting isn't doing anything" when she's supposed to say "lightning". (itch doesn't let me post the screenshot for some reason)
i just wanted to ask if there is any benefit to separating season 1 and 2 into different files rather than keeping it all in one. is it to conserve file size?
Whenever i see a beautifully drawn game like this i always wish it would be animated. I know how much work goes into 2d animation so i have a real appreciation for it.
there's a bug if i go to club naughty after talking to all women there at least once. when i try talking to the bouncer, a tutorial message keeps showing up and not allowing me to progress.
I guess "niche fetiche" is up to interpretation cause that seemed quite tame to me, not enough to warrant the choice but it makes sense. Also i didn't necessarily mean negative repercussions from the choice to refuse, just some repercussion. Like maybe it causes her to act different toward the MC in the future. Or maybe not letting her view our memories changes the relationship in some way.
excited to see what's down the pipeline for this one. I also wanted to ask if all sex scenes are going to be optional as a matter of principe moving forward. It seemed to me to be out of character for the option to refuse Fudge's handjob (?) to even be available. I thought that maybe it would have some repercusions on the story but for now it seems like it just avoids the scene with Fudge and nothing else happens.
i've been eyeing this game for a little while and i'm wondering if i should play it now or wait for the 2.0 version. Any estimatives on when that will come out?
Hello Mr. (or Ms.) Cibbon. I have just finished the latest version of your game and i want to share some of my thoughts on it.
First of all i wanna talk about what is already here, what i like and don't like before i talk what i wish would be expanded on.
I wanna first mention the artstyle and the animations which is what initially drew me to the game. Particularly the animations are very reminiscent of Goddesses' Whim. They are very high quality and full of detail which tends to be a weakness of a lot of other AVNs so i hope it continues in further updates.
I like the overall writing of the game so far. All of the jokes landed for me and i liked the overall presentation and writing choices. I don't love the setup of having five different goddess that each represent one of the five senses ruling over the universe, and the cold war they have over Manaka. I'm not crazy on this setup but it's not a complete deal breaker for me. The characters seem to have interesting and distinct personalities. My personal favourite so far is Belle. I like how she's not just cold and distant, she's acutally serious and straight to business. That kind of personality, particularly on women, has a lot of potential and is quite hard to write, specially when the cracks start to show. I hope it gets the attention it deserves.
I think the pacing of the story so far has been quite adequate. The only part that i think dragged on was the execution scene before our characters arrived. I think something could have been cut without jeopardizing the scene and making it a little less boring. Other than that the rest was fine. Nothing felt rushed or overstayed it's welcome.
There are some interesting ideas in here that i hope get improved on. With the slave knights having powers related to the main five sense that really gives room to some interesting interactions and problem solving from the part of the characters. Specially with the MC's heightened sense of smell. I hope that gets expanded upon and used to solve problems in some out of the box ways in the future.
Manaka having a scarce male population and because of such scarcity men being essentially a protected class in this world opens to a lot of interesting world building possibilties. I hope that there is a satisfactory explanation as to why men are so scarce in this world and i hope that this fact is handled apropriately. For example, in such a world, men wouldn't really be able to take on more dangerous and risky jobs since a man's life would be much more valued. It would also mean that men have a higher market value not only in the job market but also in the dating market since there are literally just less of them. I hope that these societal repercusions of men being scarce are properly thought out.
Something else that i hope gets expanded upon is why and how Fudge knows so much the slave knight contract. Specially the bit about her knowing that anything promised by the goddesses in their own domain gets automatically added to the contract seemed suspicious to me. How could she discover something like that? It might be something incredibly trivial and unimportant but i like seeing little loose like that being tied up.
Anyway that's it for my impromtu review. Thanks for reading all the way through. Excited to hear your response!
Hello Mr. Atemsiel. It's me, again. This time with a shorter post, just wanna ask a question. How is the sex scene with Sasha in the latest update supposed to be accessed? I, for the life of me, couldn't find it. I like to unlock all the scenes organicanically to i can know the context in which they take part. However, i used the "unlock everything" button for the first time to unlock this scene because i couldn't figure out what i needed. From the scene itself, it seems that in her slave route, you make the deal with her (that you'll give her some relief if she can stay quiet in class) but she doesn't manage to and you punish her for it. But that doesn't seem to be possible ingame? Help appreciated!
