I played for a little while, up until you get to the bedroom to the person who wants the teddy bear. It's a very good looking game, and the story got me curious to see how it ends! The time stopping mechanic is cool and works really well.
I think your game has amazing potential with just a few quick fixes :
- The protagonist walks so slow it's almost a crawl, and since there is some back and forth between the rooms, this can slow down the game a lot.
- Being able to hold multiple items on you would also help better pace the game in my opinion, for instance I picked up a screwdriver at the beginning of the game but didn't get to use it, so I dropped it. Same for the heart. If the screwdriver or heart is used later in the game, it's not fun to have to remember where it was and having to go all the way back there.
- The time stopping ability should take shorter to become available again when you've used it a short period.
Besides that, great mood and atmosphere, love the storytelling, the sound effects are top notch, great job here!