Hello and welcome to Feedback Quest - Visual Novels! This is Hythrain, reporting live with my feedback!

I'm glad I got another chance to play this particular demo. When I played it the last time, I didn't get much time to get through it all. Having now done so, I'm very much enjoying things. There's a lot more choice going on than I remember seeing, and I've noticed flags for those choices which indicate a change in the story ending. This excites me, since this is where visual novels thrive.

I will admit, certain parts of the game bewildered me with how different they felt. The intro sequence and the credits are an example of this. Not saying they're bad, no no. It just became funny how, with all the oddities of Grendel as a character, that having this extra level of wildness just felt appropriate.

I honestly don't have much feedback to give. I can't wait to see more. Though one thing I want to ask: you have multiple titles under the Welcome to Chirchester name. Will the full game be seeing all of these titles mashed into one, or is it intended as multiple games?

Totally crazy story that might develop into quite some fun! Functional, but nice graphics, and adequate music.

The game just jumps into the middle of the story. Maybe a bit of foreshadowing in the intro would be nice. There's also a bit of a confusing story line with flashbacks and different persons as protagonist and decision makers. It's not as linear as most VNs, certainly interesting, but maybe needs to be made clearer to the player to follow along.

Some minor issues you might want to change:

- You use the same image next to the dialogue than on the main scene. That looks weird. I would either omit it or use only a small face of the person speaking, maybe a bit stylized.

- Save is not available at junctions where one needs it most.

- Player can't roll back beyond junctions.

- Not sure whether I like the speech bubbles. It seems like a clash of styles to me, but maybe that's just me.

- Story seems sometimes a bit contrived: why would, e.g., a newspaper print something and deny it immediately in the same article? Maybe if it were an online article that gets corrected while the player is reading it...?

In any case, a fun VN in progress! Looking forward to the end product. :)