What did you think of Bee as a narrator?
Bee is good narrator.
Being teeneger is not easy BUT
It's hard to be the only one gay person in strict family, I guess. Especially when even you don't accept this fact.
Her "ailment" making her day-dream a lot is very interesting too.
What was your favorite ending?
"Head in the clouds". The CG was very cute. They'd be great couple if they'd dating. But it'd would require Bee to disocver her sexual orientatation, make coming out and confess to her feelings.
I like games with a lot of choices, routes and a lot of endings (including bad ones). i didn't get all the endings but probably none of the is satisfying end of Bee's story. Maybe you should create next part?
Any other questions/feedback?
I don't know why but BGs add stong depressive vibe to de game. The are too gray, weathered and devoid of colors. You could find better ones or draw them by yourself or find someone to do it. They are the biggest flaw of the game.
You should work on choosing better angles of BGs to look good with sprites. It looks bad. Some of them don't even fit to the first-person-view.
Interesting characters with interesting personalities. The story is a bit lineal
I realy like the UI. Sprites are good.
Dialogues are ok, a bit chaotic but ok. And unusual font doesn't help with reading. Especially if someone has dyslexia (I don't). I know, you wanted it look like hand-writed but you could find something "more readable".
Most of the scenes are ok and more-less well-written but some of them are a bit too-daring (in example Bee's dirty fantasies).