Hi Kizunue.
Thank you for taking the time to play my early version of my game. Thank you for enjoying the music, for me the music is the main part of the game, since that is the one thing (apart from 1 song) that I am making 100% myself. The English mistakes?, well If i had a talented proof reader or spell checker then it might not be much of an issue. Your not the first person to tell me about the intro and should be were not was", for me the character thats talking I felt was, well was more appropriate. I knew that it was not the correct way to go about it, however I appreciate the constructive feedback and I will take it under advisement. I am looking for someone to proof read everything before I finish it, so I am aware that my English is not spot on. Considering the last time I wrote anything story wise I was 13 and I dropped out of school at 16 due to RL circumstances I never went back to learn or improve my English skills. That being said, I am really enjoying writing this story and I am glad that so far at least you are enjoying it. As for the male protagonist Tom and Theo are not really the stars, yes the story is about them, but the real hero and the main protagonist is Ruby. Shes the kick ass hero in my Story.
Question did you find the bad endings? did you find the path with the letter and the path with the mums backstory?. Just wondering :)
Anyway I am grateful for any and all feedback and I will strive to improve my game and I am working hard on writing chapter 3 now and bringing the story together a bit more.
If you can read through my bad English haha
Thanks again for your time and feedback, i really do appreciate it.
Cheers
Andy