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Niven knocks another ball out of the ballpark, with the release of 'Unseen Trace.' Want to visit your mom's grave...? Are you really, really sure?
A few remarks that have to do with aesthetics:
1) At the very beginning, you dump 3 sentences on the screen. Have you considered to do 1 at a time [fade in/out] and then onward to the next?
2) There seems to be a certain order in which to pick up [and dispose of] the crates. Any logical reason?
3) Triggering the ground keeper to chase you [fully] is a bit cumbersome [as you can see]
All in all, you've delivered another gem, and it's one of the reasons I'm following you. I hope others will follow suit.
Well done and kudos to you, good sir!
P.S. I've added some extra lighting [Adobe] to the underground scenes, as it was too dark for the audience to see anything properly.