Classic dark fairy tale setup, very cool. The tables for creating the dungeons are great, really fun ideas in here. I wish we had some more NPCs with some secrets, rumors, or varying motivations to make the players time outside the mounds a little more interesting. Overall looks like a solid one or two shot that I would run.
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Thank you so much, It means a lot that you looked at this and left feedback.
The book was much longer and included a random encounter list I had to cut for page count. (I am a long winded person and like to get into it), I was also planning on including both a Minor and Major Mound to inspire which was packed with cool fights and interesting NPCs.
I might post it as a follow up, I got like most of the way done, and I'm not sure if I want to put it up yet because I might get disqualified for like another PDF of supplemental materials thus subverting the page count rule.
If you'd be interested I'll finish it up and post it once the jam is done.