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I honestly don't know. I'm not sure that you even did anything wrong with the game, it just feels off, like you just eyeballed some values poorly or something. Cause that's how my games feel when I do that :D 

I don't really have a good answer for you, I think this is something you just gotta feel out, try some things, see what feels good.

Ok. Thanks for the advice.