Keep it up! I was gonna suggest doing something re: Detective #'s name, but it seems like you're one step ahead of us. Anyway, sorry this is a bit late, as I also was out for the count, for awhile...
Awesome chapters, and a great setup for what is to come. There's a lot of dialogue I just wanna praise, but I feel like there's a chance there some players that, y'know, read comments first, and then play the game. Maybe not many of them, but - I've been that player, in the past. So, uh! Just know that I laughed a lot, I thought a lot, I learned the value of standing on my head.
Outside of cheering for you, anything we can do to keep your motivation coming?
With the release of the press kit, I'm kind of tempted to try to reach out to an outlet or something, but I don't have an actual journalism degree... Nor do I have a social media following, because I don't use social media. Uh, so, I guess I'm back to cheering, but with even more heart?!
Lemme know if something comes to mind; for now, I'll just state that I especially liked seeing Nell's take on Hackett, and felt that the finale of this set was really good. Made for a good team, ahaha! (And the meta-option for a certain case had me in stitches.)
Fave new track of the last three chapters - again, sorry I missed an update! - Upside Down. Personal detection method life goal: Detective Ether's approach. Swinger's as well, to be honest