I think it's a cute take on the theme! After reading the description I commend you for seeing it through to the end and posting it even though it's not as polished as you'd like. Just simply finishing something in a jam with such a short timeframe is already impressive.
One bit of feedback I have is being more descriptive about the gameplay on the page if not in the game itself to be sure players know the mechanics and controls. It is probably safe to assume that most players will pick up the gist rather quickly for this little game but it's still good to include that somewhere anyway for accessibility.