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I see you have fixed quite a few bugs, but unfortunately, I played a version without those fixes. So, let's set those bugs aside and focus on the game itself. I always appreciate well textured environments, as it helps in making a story more believable. On that end you scored well. Although the 'loop' element has been used extensively by many DEVs, you manage to keep it fresh and intriguing, so the flow of the story itself doesn't get interrupted. Thus, the overall verdict is a positive one, as you have kindled my interest in wanting to know more and how this story will unfold in its final, full version.
To be fair I will not comment on the bugs, as you have corrected many already. So, well done and kudos to all involved!