Very interesting story! I like the fact that you have to play through it a few times to get the whole story. This game has a lot of potential and I can't wait to see what you come up with next :D
I don't know if you've heard of Game Development World Championship before (gdwc2019) but it's a competition for indie game developers where they can submit their games and it's free! It's great if you want some more visibility for the game and it only takes a couple of minutes to join :)