This felt like a mix between Edgar Allan Poe's poem The raven and the game Layers of fear. This was AMAZING and I enjoyed the eerie atmosphere you've created. The art style was right up my lane and the story with the rhymes were so cool :D
I don't know if you've heard of Game Development World Championship before (gdwc2019) but it's a competition for indie game developers where they can submit their games and it's free! It's great if you want some more visibility for the game and it only takes a couple of minutes to join :)