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The presentation and coding is pretty fantastic, I'm impressed.

The story was fun and in some sense thought-provoking, even though in execution it did end up feeling too much like a Spanish soap opera for my personal tastes. But I did really enjoy the underlying message in this one, about not fighting other people's battles for them. Although I must say, the way the abusive boyfriend did a complete 180 as soon as the dragon stood his ground felt unrealistic: I see what you were going for and being all bark and no bite is not unrealistic per se, but the way the shift happened in the span of one line felt a bit too sudden.

While the high fantasy bits did feel a bit superfluous, I did not hate them. I do think they might be a tad confusing for the folks who aren't familiar with the whole "My Wolf" discourse.

Again, impressive work from the whole team!

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Thanks for the feedback :3

Yeah, I rushed through it to be sure in regards to Zephyr. Definitely something I'm gonna adjust after the jam!

I laughed audibly at the 'Spanish soap opera' comparison though cause it's so true, and now I'm imagining Nate as the (gasps in Spanish) meme.