The biggest issue is the keyboard input. It's all too easy to make a typing error because one holds down a key for a fraction too long.
I liked the 'joining the army' montage and how the words were able to control the character if they moved in a direction with the wrong timing.
Just a question though... was it possible to copyedit the newpaper article correctly? Did I miss something? I worry I ended up with an undesirable storyline path.