Super cool game, kinda short and only had really one option (unless the other option lead to branching paths) but i like the idea of the story and could definitely see the influence from other games. I'm a huge fan of hollow knight so your art attracted me, and I like the fact that the ending was a direct reference to Nier: Automata. I'd add more choice options if I would add anything too it, and make make a simple walking animation for the characters. I like the art style and would be interested in what you might be able to do with a character design I have from another game I am working on currently.
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