This was quite the read but a pleasant one for sure!
Your game premise is related to multiple other RTS style games but makes an interesting twist through use of the traditional mechanics in a new way. Your document structure is clean, legible and consistent despite a few minor spelling errors; makes for an easy comprehension of all your game's mechanics to-date. Which you've planned and described very well.
Gwen was right, it was hard to not give such a document a perfect score. I look forward to seeing what you have in store for this project in the future!