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Hi, maybe It's too late to say this. But I found what I think is a grammar error. The line in question goes "I sat down to hug my legs, an buries my face into my arms." The word "buries" would be replaced by "bury". "Buries" is used for third person, as I have been taught. Sorry if this is incorrect. English is not my native language. XD

Still, I'm liking this novel so far. Thank you!

Charos Villacho1 year ago(-1)

Thank you, I'll ask Rev to look into it. ^_^

ZelarP1 year ago

Okay, I found another mistake. "Grab" changes to "grabs". This time is third person :3

Charos Villacho1 year ago(+1)

Hi ZelarP, would you like to join our Discord server where you can post the mistakes there instead of here? Rev might be able to explain better than I could! My native language is ASL, not English. ^_^

ZelarP1 year ago

Oh, Right. I didn't notice that there's a discord server. Thank you.

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